
Macky's personality was timid and frail at one point and then BAM! heroic and a confident jock the next, then back to being an uncertain outcast teenager again. I didn't know if I should like her or be wary that she was just using him. It was also very confusing what sort of relationship Macky and Tate really had throughout the book, which was frustrating. She either has a really good theory of what's going on in the town and is angry over it or totally oblivious when proof is presented to her, it felt silly.


Alot of the reactions were under or over exaggerated, especially for Tate. Alot of the language felt odd for teenagers to use. But that too much of the book was 'filler' that could have been used to give the characters more than their two dimensional feel. Overall I felt the background story, the characters, had a really good basis. I felt this story had a solid premise but as others have commented about, it dragged and was slow in several parts.
